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    Between heaven and the deep blue sea

    BennyB
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    Post by BennyB Wed 14 Sep 2011, 12:58 am


    In between unspoken words
    lie so many questions
    we may never ask
    for its not fitting
    to question late night cries
    underneath a lonely sky
    and a broken bloody hart.

    Its a tricky balance of bullshit
    that sells life to the everyday man
    who walks, talks, sleeps and breath
    pray and preach
    hope scribed in lotto dreams
    scratch cards
    and his Friday fortune cookie treats ...

    With the A B C's
    crossed out,
    days and weeks
    torn from life’s calendar
    what’s left to say
    what’s left to do
    If we do not care
    to ask
    to say
    I am also just a bleeding soul
    with nothing left to lose

    my written words
    may fall on death ears,
    my spoken words may echo
    in a room filled with darkness,
    but my presence lights a dark night
    if only you are willing to feel....

    In my moments of sanity
    far and in between reality
    my yesterday, now and maybe
    waits in between open spaces
    only crossroads
    and question marks of somewhere
    in a black nights reality...

    BennyB
    © 13/09/2011 Barend Booysen

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    Post by Guest Wed 14 Sep 2011, 1:14 am

    ek soek woorde en snak na my asem!!
    die gedig vloei in reality in van die daaglikse lewe wat die siel sluk die vrees vir verwerping wat tot stilte dwing dit wat brand om ge-uiter te word, hierdie werk is seker die beste werk ek ooit van 'n manlike digter gelees het, ons vrouens vergeet mans kan so diep voel , of dalk weet ons dit nie!
    Benna dit is vir my Keats in my eie voorhuis dankie!

    Julia Hill
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    Post by Julia Hill Wed 14 Sep 2011, 4:43 am

    Standing in awe of you Benny!
    anderkant
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    Post by anderkant Wed 14 Sep 2011, 1:27 pm

    Saam met Ronel snak mens waarlik en saam met Julia staan ek in absolute "awe" van hierdie besonderse werk. Dit is so dat vrouens soms vergeet mans voel werklik diep... All men are not men, and all women are not women... ek sonder graag uit: "it's not fitting" - dis hoe die lewe is, ons almal gaan deur stadiums waar ons met ons hart voel en gees luister en "alleen" voel want behoede ons siele as ons dit uiter. Ek eer hierdie puik werk van jou Mr. B!
    girllivinginherdreams
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    Post by girllivinginherdreams Wed 14 Sep 2011, 2:54 pm

    Benna how load and clear you talk to my heart with this poem....
    thank you for writing it Smile
    AmmieMoon
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    Post by AmmieMoon Wed 14 Sep 2011, 3:17 pm

    Staan ek nou hier droëbek en lees die 'lofliedere' hier bo en weet opsluit nie wat om by te voeg om aan hierdie grootse werk van jou eer te gee nie....Weet net , ek ken jou en hier lees ek Ben en sy versugtings, vrae, twyfels, en vraagstukke..... my doker prins, wat 'n voorreg om weer in jou woord-talent te kan dwaal ! Sproes-bedinges !! Like a Star @ heaven
    BennyB
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    Post by BennyB Thu 15 Sep 2011, 3:31 pm

    Sjoe julle, baie dankie vir die kommentaar! Weet nie mooi of ek dit verdien nie Embarassed

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