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    Love's stage

    Janet
    Janet


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    Post by Janet Fri 09 Mar 2012, 9:13 pm

    It was an unconscious love.
    Polaroid perfect and picket fence pretty.

    Love’s curtain fell. All was dark, still.
    Except for the chattering of familiarity
    riding so effortlessly on nights
    turning on days.

    It was an unconscious love.
    Polaroid perfect and picket fence pretty.

    The encore shook love’s stage awake.
    The curtain lifted her skirt with a jerk
    and exposed a blinding glimpse of
    polarity’s laughing face.

    It is a conscious love.
    Naked, flowing and full of beauty.

    Love’s stage beckons hate to take a bow.
    Each to their turn its part must play.
    Light illuminating dark and
    yes teasing no.

    And so, it is, without review.
    This conscious love.
    Naked, flowing and full of beauty.

    © Janet Pieterse 2010
    BennyB
    BennyB


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    Love's stage Empty Re: Love's stage

    Post by BennyB Tue 13 Mar 2012, 9:25 pm

    I like the piece a lot. Weldone! What a Face

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