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    Elijah's Spring

    Gerrit Hermens
    Gerrit Hermens


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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Mon 19 Dec 2011, 6:49 pm

    In a heart of stone
    a creed of love had been carved
    with hammer and chisel.

    deep groans of agony
    have sounded as a horn in the valley
    to reach and echo in the peaks.
    years have passed
    and attention omitting,
    have resulted in moss and dust
    filling the grooves of true being.
    a wispy white beard now sway from a chiselled face
    and crooked hands battle to grasp life’s winter.

    venturing from a wooden cabin
    high on the snowy slopes,
    a young hunters-heart purposefully ascends the rough terrain.
    armed with a dagger, an apple and a will
    the mighty man to be, climbs high.
    he clasps a jutting rock
    and hauls himself up and over.
    for a moment a glance back down
    leaves his senses ambiguous:
    humbled by the majesty...
    strengthened by the achievement...
    he turns to face a dark desolate cave.
    with newfound strength
    he strides forward
    cobweb and moss,
    and hand deep dust
    cover his head,
    fill his nostrils,
    and slow his stride.
    yet forward, he Must...
    upon a flat stone,
    “An alter...” he whispered,
    the dust, he stroked away.
    with his dagger he cut away the ancient moss
    the curiosity in his mind
    echoed the emptiness in his belly
    and he gratefully ate the sweet apple
    all the while carving away the decay.

    in a heart of stone
    a creed of love has been replenished
    with a dagger, an apple and a will.

    the mountains groaned and shook,
    for the wispy beard was thickening and darkening
    the crooked hands were growing bulging muscles
    and the heart of stone began to pulse with life
    tears frozen in bitterness
    break free to bring life to one and all.

    the carpenter of hearts
    steps from the cave of glory
    and ascends on chariots of fire to the heavens.

    ©G. Hermens, 13-9-2011.
    Camsica
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    Post by Camsica Thu 12 Jan 2012, 4:41 am

    Sjoe!

    Powerful!
    Jy't my vote!
    Gerrit Hermens
    Gerrit Hermens


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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Thu 19 Jan 2012, 10:44 pm

    Nederig dankie!

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