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    Claira Summers
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 08 Nov 2011, 1:23 pm

    You twist my mind
    in two equal parts
    you binomial effect
    is crushing my heart
    the biplane im traveling in
    on a crash course today
    bide your time
    wait your turn
    you have my will
    it crashed and burned
    the bivouac of fear
    that you let me stay in
    will eventually fail
    to protect me within
    bipolar your bitterness, oh so sweet
    your heartship and anger
    forever with me
    degraded
    enslaved
    in your heartless confine
    the danger you cause me
    billowing inside
    like great walls of water
    like the power of pride
    bipolar bisection
    you cut me in half
    enslaved me
    and broke me
    forever entombed
    the fact of the matter
    is simply self-doomed
    SWERWER
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    Post by SWERWER Tue 08 Nov 2011, 7:03 pm

    Dear Claira,

    This work speaks of an eloquence, not only in the use of the English language but also in the linguafranca of the Bipolar condition. The command of both, in my opinion is very rare because only a true bipolar sufferer will be able to fully comprehend your written words."bipolar your bitterness, oh so sweet" The bitterness of the depths of depression and the horror contained therein ofsett against the crazy orgasmic high of the manic state is skillfully summed up in this sentence.

    The two halves/extremes of the bipolar person once again is portrayed by the use of the words Binomial,Biplane,cut me in half which renders this work as your best and most brilliant work yet. Congratulations on a truly remarkable poem.

    As a sufferer myself i can only deduce that you know this demon well! :-)

    SWERWER

    PS. To all the readers hereof. The two halves referred to i.e.the extremes of this condition and any suggestion that the Bipolar sufferer functions only within the confines of these extremes is incorrect. Untreated the sufferer migrates to these extremes from time to time and such an occurance cannot be predicted. With treatment these extremes can be avoided successfully and a sufferer can live a perfectly normal life proved the treatment is religiously adhered to.
    Claira Summers
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 08 Nov 2011, 7:12 pm

    Thank you so so much for this comment. You brighten up a truely BAD day. There is a huge smile on this bipolar face.
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    Post by Torm Tue 08 Nov 2011, 11:16 pm

    Well written. I see a few children struggle with this every day and it is heart-breaking at that age. So much time left for damages to be suffered.
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 08 Nov 2011, 11:21 pm

    Thank you vry much Torm. Its a very bad road to be on for them, it haunts you, your whole life. All you can do is try and understand as much as possable.
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    Post by Claira Summers Wed 09 Nov 2011, 7:37 am

    Thank you again SWERWER, I think the description of the condition and its treatment may rescue some readers who do not understand the full consequence thereof.

    This struggle of two worlds, confide into one body mind and soul. These visits to the land of the lost. Complete with it's ups and downs - is like a loud scream to the deaf, or a dark sunrise to a new day, useless if you do not understand it well.

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