The exorcism of you


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    The exorcism of you

    Post by lerasmus on Fri 17 Feb 2012, 12:10 am

    Considering in retrospect
    the almostness of us
    the thrill of exploration,
    the tender dance of lust
    barely even acknowledged
    yet it couldn’t be undone
    no sad ending to be mourned
    as it never quite begun

    Tormented by your demons,
    my private brand of hell
    I exorcise your presence
    escape my prison cell
    I crave a sense of purpose
    the purging of my soul
    an all encompassing peace
    to make my spirit whole

    These words I write today
    your eyes will never see.
    Goodbye my almost lover,
    I have set you free.
    Rudi Coetzer

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    Re: The exorcism of you

    Post by Rudi Coetzer on Fri 17 Feb 2012, 12:26 pm

    I Like!!!
    It pours and flows.
    And floods.
    Well bled.
    (Oohh..nice to see you and your poetry last...)

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    Re: The exorcism of you

    Post by SWERWER on Wed 07 Mar 2012, 12:59 pm

    Almost but not quite! How frustrating. Your work speaks of clear emotion with your written words that are well constructed that lead up to a climax. A nice bit of work that i like very much.


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