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    Julia Hill
    Julia Hill


    Location | Ligging : All Around The World
    Posts | Bydraes : 151
    Points | Punte : 259
    Join date | Datum aangesluit : 2011-08-28
    Age | Ouderdom : 53

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    Post by Julia Hill Thu 05 Jan 2012, 10:23 pm

    I hate it when I cannot write
    My mind lays barren, bear
    A thought just round the corner
    Elusive, haughty ... taunting me!

    They seem to sneak on tippy-toes
    Like children hiding where I seek
    In macabre and never ending games
    Giggling, Sniggering ... taunting me!

    The words fly and flit
    Like birds on the wing
    Or hiding in overgrown trees
    Calling, whistling ... taunting me!

    Sometimes they caress the veil
    Between waking thoughts and sleep
    Like a long lost lovers touch
    Tempting, seducing ... taunting me!

    Then they lap like lazy waves
    Upon some foreign shore
    A lulling of the senses
    Hypnotic, rhythmic ... taunting me!

    But every now and then
    There is a little seed
    Or a bashful, impish smile
    A robin’s call
    Warm and loving embrace
    A shower of sea-soaked spray
    And just maybe – from that beauty
    A brief and blessed respite
    The taunting stops
    And words come wiggling through!

    04 January 2012
    Sekelmaantjie
    Sekelmaantjie


    Location | Ligging : Saldanhabaai, Kaapse Weskus
    Posts | Bydraes : 23
    Points | Punte : 47
    Join date | Datum aangesluit : 2011-10-01
    Age | Ouderdom : 24

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    Post by Sekelmaantjie Sat 14 Jan 2012, 12:33 am

    Hi it's Janke here. Great peom.I really liked 'the words fly and flit like birds on the wing'. I love you
    Julia Hill
    Julia Hill


    Location | Ligging : All Around The World
    Posts | Bydraes : 151
    Points | Punte : 259
    Join date | Datum aangesluit : 2011-08-28
    Age | Ouderdom : 53

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    Post by Julia Hill Thu 19 Jan 2012, 11:22 pm

    Hello Ms Janke! How are you doing ... miss you all very very much .... thank you so much for popping in and reading my work Smile xxxx

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